For your perusal

As some of you know, I’ve been doing a creative writing course for a while now. I think I’m getting better, albeit slowly. The tasks are often to write a short story under a certain amount of words. I’m not very good at this 🙂 I have a fair few sitting round that I’m loathe to cull. Given that they’ll just disappear otherwise, I’ve put one online. I’m not claiming that it’s any good, but I believe it’s better for it to be at least available for reading than to disappear, never to be seen again. It’s called “Strands”, and can be found here. If you read it, would you mind letting me know what you think (bearing in mind I’m just a n00b 🙂 )? Thanks very much.